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This is new. An IF with 2 MC that you can choose their adventure at the same time? Damn. Is there any update tho?

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oohhh this is very nice and interesting!! i cant wait for the next chapter

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I can't wait for more... this is interesting....

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I can't wait for the next chapter, it's my favourite interactive novel so far! :)

I love your take on werewolves! It being like a separate entity within you, kinda acting separately with its own thoughts, like with it "communicating" through the audible (to you) growls and stuff. It's really neat :D

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Nice work, I love it! I wanted to let you know that we've mentioned it in our list of recommended Twine stories. But if that's not okay just let me know. You can view it here, let us know if there are any other details we should add for your title --> https://itch.io/t/1763600/twine-games-with-character-customization-part-1

Hey! Enjoying the game, but I just wanted to report something - I chose brother instead of sister, and also chose the "oh, girl," option in the beginning, but Carol referred to my character as a man and the personal info states that I had a sister instead of a brother?

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Hi! That is correct. The first character in the prologue is not the same character as you play in chapter 1. That character is the brother you chose, whereas in chapter 2  you will start playing as the sister. Each chapter will switch between each character.

Hope this helps. :)

totally missed that, thank you!

As much as I like the premise and everything, the white on black is really hard on my eyes. Would you consider a lighter and more forgiving color scheme?

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Absolutely no problem there. As it is a newer game I haven't yet gone through and edited much, if any, UI so at the moment it's all mostly at the default settings. I'll try and get that changed to something a bit easier on the eyes before or by the next story update. Thanks for letting me know. :)

This game is great so far! Looking forward to seeing what comes next!

I really like it but it sometimes says "Error: <<set>>: bad evaluation: Unexpected token ',' on some choices.

I don't know if the dev has abandonned this game but it's really good for a demo. Keep it up!!!

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Hi there! This game is definitely not abandoned, there's an update incoming that may or may not fix the issues, however, if you can could you tell me where these errors pop up so I can help fix them for the next update?

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When you chose ''You barely pay me at all, Carol.'' or ''You barely pay me at all, Caroline.'' it says that but it still takes the answer so it's not really a bad thing.

Ah, okay thank you. That issue has been fixed in the upcoming version so once I update that shouldn't be an issue even if you can get past it. Thanks for letting me know.

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I absolutely love what you have so far, I'm dying to see what happens next- the characters have drawn me in already

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I just want to say, I'm super excited to see what this turns into! I just finished playing the demo, and I absolutely loved what's here so far.