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I'm glad to find this again. I really loved it on dashingdon, so I'm hoping to see more. Stupid Arke not realizing my MC's feelings...

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i hate this... it makes my heart ache... and i have scoured the LIs... sad to say that a certain someone would never have an interest to my queenslayer, my character would forever wallow in unrequited love for the rest of their life...

save option doesn’t work on the mobile?

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arke my beloved

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Mc deny abt kissing  Arke but Emeric said nothing abt that before

wait a minute,  we can actually kiss him? I thought we can't, this option is available? Can you please tell me how you get it?

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hmm it's been some time but from memory alone I don't think we can kiss Arke (yet hopefully) Emeric just said that to get a rise out of Mc and Arke, thing is that Mc says the same thing 2 times mc denies kissing Arke once and Emeri doesn't react and again afterwards leading to the next set of choices

(It seems not to be the case anymore. From a quick check up to the end of the demo the error isn't there anymore)

ooh that is why, okay u guess:) thank you for answering my question, have a good day 😊 💗 

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uooogh tiny arke. love that traumatised lil dude

oooh so good so far!! excited to see more!

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Im kinda confuse with the deamenor, the thing with purple and blue. example with intimidating/ charming, i choose dont worry about it kid then it have more purple, does it mean im intimidating? or maybe charming (which i wanna be)

Love it, hope you will continue this project author <3

On another note, I really like this story! I've played the demo on dashingdon before but having re-read it here, I can see there's been a lot of changes. I'm excited to see what else is different from the previous demo and to play anything new. 

I also appreciate the way you've given us freedom to shape the personality of the MC. They're allowed to be strong yet emotional, or cruel but still caring. It's a nice change

Just a slight typo that I saw when you choose to put off the visit to Herron. Second sentence. "Di" instead of Do.

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Hi there, thanks for letting me know. This will be fixed in the next update :)

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So i liked that different dream entities are actually different, in their personalities.  I havnt picked a favorite yet, because Im not sure who / what they really are.  Are they someone we want to work with, or really something that has possesed and ruined our lives (not actually asking, look forward to finding out, just expressing my delima reason I cant choose lol)

I liked the plot so far, though honestly it does seem to leave the MC adrift, whether he signs up all the way and considers things his duty, or whether he would rather just ignore it all and let someone else handle it, you are definitely left with the impression that they are not enjoying their position.

But my only serious complaint would be with the captain / commander character.  They are seriously disrespectful, and honestly I'd either dismiss them on the spot, or on a bad day, just toss some purple lightening at their chest too and be rid of them.  Im nearly certain that is not going to be an option though, But will there be any option to move through the rest of the story without them constantly commenting on how your not good enough / not doing it right / lazy for letting others do things etc.  I hate back seat drivers =(

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I love this♥️ I love how you made the possibility of making the mc both fragile and strong. Hoping to read more.. kudos to you🤗

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This is a really cool game, with a very interesting story and complex relationships. Congratulations! You do have a few typos and awkward sentences though, but nothing too distracting. Thank you again for this amazing piece of art!

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I frisking love this story, really, thank you for your hard work! PS: I kinda like Arke, will he have more screen time? <3

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Hi, I'm glad you like my story! Arke most definitely will have plenty more screen time for you to enjoy! Or not enjoy, as the case may be ;p

I really liked this, thank you for making it! I wanted to let you know that we've mentioned your story in our list of recommended Twine stories. But if that's not okay just let me know. You can view it here, let us know if there are any other details we should add for your title --> https://itch.io/t/1763600/twine-games-with-character-customization-part-1

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This made me discover a new feeling that I didn't know I needed, which is being powerful and threatening while also having nipple piercings 😳


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THIS is SO good-- thank you for making this and posting it, it's lovely, and I've followed! 

Btw; the saves aren't working, if you're unaware.

Hi there, I'm glad you like it so far!

If you're working off Firefox unfortunately something about the program at the moment doesn't seem to gel well with the saves. What usually works is saving your game manually which is done by clicking "save" -> "Save to disk" ->  the file will usually go into your downloads folder but feel free to move it into its own folder -> then clicking "load from disk" and selecting it in your files to load the game back in. I'm trying to get everything working again but so far this is the only method that seems to work for firefox right now.

If this doesn't work for you, or you're using another browser please tell me so I can look into trying to get that fixed too.

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Omg! I have been followinv your WIP in COG and I was surprised (pleasantly) to see it here on itch 😊

May I ask tho, will your updates be here now and not in COg anymore? 🤔

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Hi there! Yes all updates will be on itch and my blog now because I'm no longer making the game with choice script.  For various reasons I've elected to continue and rewrite it in twine. I'm glad you've found it again.

Hope this helps. :)

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I really like this, please tell me you plan to continue it..... Q.Q

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Yes I definitely do! Because I'm working on two games I'm switching between which ones I'm working on chapter by chapter. I'm currently working on a quick update for this one for the first chapter before I go into the second but the first update should be out soon! I'm glad you enjoy it!

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Oh my god,this was one of the first demo's I played on dashingdon! I'm so excited to see the new demo and play it again!!